Sunday, November 22, 2009

Thesis Paragraph

The United States has exemplified numerous ways in which they abuse their power as a nation. We may consider their relationship with Mexico for instance. A relationship which is based on economic and political sprouted from an opportunity to take over a vulnerable country. Mexico does not see how America is only using them for their resources to make themselves prosper, but goes along since they are receiving particular benefits which stabilizes their economy.

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  1. Think about how to develop and specify this a little further - is it your argument that the U.S. is an imperial power in relation to Mexico but that Mexico hasn't resisted? What part of Mexican society are you referring to there? How is this imperial relationship manifest. Look at using clearer, more specific language to get this across.

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  2. Im sure Mexico,"see how America is only using them for their resources", but there must be reasons why Mexico cannot take control. If you can see an issue, chances are other people can see it too :)

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  3. i love your introduction on your research paper. It cant wait to read more!!

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  4. How did the United States come in contact with Mexico (how did they first meet)?

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